Rewrite In-class writing: Due WEDNESDAY

• Think about and change any parts of the essay that I suggested were not clear or were confusing.
• Add details!! Add at least three sentences to every body paragraph. Highlight these sentences.
• Make sure your introduction has at least three sentences. Underline your thesis statement.
• Correct word form, grammar and sentence errors.
• Submit the first draft and the rewrite in class on Wednesday (typing is preferred but not required).